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What happens to the dedication?

 

What changes in the first line?

 

Which word is changed here & again before the final version?

 

Trancript of (D)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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How is "tortured for your own sin" made less personal in the final version?  Think about who the "you" is in this version of the poem.

 

Transcript of (D)

 

(D) Repository: Oxford English Faculty Library.        
Date: 8 October 1917
Place: Craiglockhart, Scotland
Early drafts of "Dulce et Decorum Est" are dedicated to Jessie Pope, an author of children's books and conventional patriotic verse.