Advanced Techniques in Written French
French 213
, Fall 1999
STV 233A, TR 11-12:15

Dr. Lorie Heggie
Assistant Professor of Linguistics & French
STV 138, 438-7579; lheggie@ilstu.edu

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Course Description:
Written communication skills in French.  Formal and informal writing, use of dictionaries and reference materials, orthography, and vocabulary building.   Grammar review.  (3 hours)
French 116 required.

Textbooks

Apprivoiser l'écrit:  techniques de l'écrit et stratégies d'autoperfectionnement. Christine Besnard et Marie-France Silver. Toronto, Canadian Scholars' Press, Inc., 1997.

French for Oral and Written Review, 5th Edition. Charles Carlut and Walter Meiden.  Fort Worth, Hot, Rinehart and Winston, 1993.

Composition et Grammaire de Texte. Dany B. Perramond. Toronto, Canadian Scholars' Press, Inc., 1997.

A good, large French-English dictionary, such as Larousse.

About the Course:
  • Objectives
  • Evaluation
  • Compositions
  • Portfolio
  • Grammar Work
  • Participation
  • Late Work
  • Objectives:
    This course is designed to help students make their writing in French more accurate, better organized, and more expressive. In addition to reading and analyzing a variety of types of writing, students will write, discuss, review, and rewrite six short compositions. The types of writing to be explored are autobiographical sketches, literary portraits, movie reviews, letter-writing, outlines, summaries, story-telling, descriptions, and analytical, persuasive essays. Class and small-group discussions will be conducted in French. In addition to our writing, we will do a guided grammar review using the first 9 chapters of Carlut & Meiden.

    Evaluation:

    Participation/Homework 15% Grammar Tests (3) 15%
    Compositions (analyses=5%) 35% Midterm 15%
    Portfolios 10% Final Exam 10%

    Compositions:
    All writing beyond the first brainstorming must be computer-printed or typewritten in standard type (12 point please), double-spaced, with one-inch margins on all sides. If you do not have a computer of your own, please use the department computer lab (STV 237). Computers in this lab are equipped with foreign-language word processing software and spell-check capabilities, as well as foreign language dictionaries, such as Le Robert électronique. (Of course, you can use these computers even if you have your own computer!)

    Writing in this course will involve a three-step process. The first step involves brainstorming and free-writing, the second will concentrate on the ideas, content, vocabulary, mechanics, and organization of the paper, and the last draft will add "grammar" to the list of aspects to be graded. Both the second and third drafts will be graded; your final grade for the paper will be the average of these two grades. Please note that it is quite possible to get a lower grade on your final draft if you have not paid sufficient attention to your grammar!

    With your third draft of each paper, you will turn in a Composition Analysis. On a separate sheet or the last page of your composition, you will do the following steps concerning the grammar of your paper:

    1. Correct as many errors that I have highlighted (or others you may find) on your own using dictionaries, grammar books, and corrections from past compositions.
    2. List the errors that you cannot correct. Type the line number and the error. If you are at a total loss as to how to express a particular idea in French, explain what you mean in English, and leave space for me to offer a solution. (This list should NOT be long!)
    3. Review your errors and list the top three errors you make most frequently. Types of errors to watch for are the following:

      noun-verb or noun-adjective agreement
      word order (e.g., placement of adverbs and adjectives)
      conjugation of irregular verbs
      use of tenses (especially the passé composé andimperfect)
      anglicisms (use of false cognates and literal translation of English expressions into French)
      wordiness and convoluted syntax
      spelling and accents
      choice of articles (e.g., definite vs. indefinite, 'des' vs. 'de') & gender nouns
      prepositions (choice of & need to repeat prepositions in a series)

    An important caution: Revision is not the simple correction of past grammar errors. The third draft should show marked improvement in word choice, organization, and clarity of detail. Sometimes the only way to jump into the next grade level is through completely re-thinking the paper.

    Portfolio:
    At midterm and the end of the semester, you will 1) gather all your writing samples, 2) re-write any paper that you wish, and 3) evaluate your progress. For this reason, please keep all your work (compositions in all stages, homework assignments, class notes) in a loose-leaf 3-ring binder (I have some used ones sitting in my office if you need one). For the portfolio, you will gather all your materials and do a Composition Analysis of all your work to date. Please answer the following questions in doing your portfolio:

    1. Which essays have you revised a fourth time, if any? For these, please do the following:
    • Correct as many errors that I have highlighted (or others you may find) on your own using dictionaries, grammar books, and corrections from past compositions.
    • List the errors that you cannot correct. Type the line number and the error. If you are at a total loss as to how to express a particular idea in French, explain what you mean in English, and leave space for me to offer a solution. (This list should NOT be long!)
    1. Review your errors and list the top five errors you make most frequently. Use the list above to help you determine some error types.
    2. Do you see improvement in content, organization, grammar, vocabulary, and mechanics? What are your strengths? What are your weaknesses?
    3. How do you feel about writing in French? Is it hard, fun, or boring?

    Grammar work:
    Your understanding of French grammar will be tested in four tests which each cover two chapters at a time. The fourth test is actually the final exam, which will combine the testing of chapters 8 and 9 of Carlut and Meiden with a section on the writing of dissertations. During the semester, you will be doing selected exercises as homework, and we will discuss each chapter as scheduled. I will give you an answer key to the exercises after they have been discussed in class, but will check off that you have done the homework at the beginning of class. If the page is largely blank, I will not give you credit for having done the work. If you have further questions or do not understand a concept, I expect to see you during my office hours, or, bring it up for discussion in class if several people have the same question.

    Participation:
    Since class discussions on grammar, writing, and peer review form an integral part of the work for this course, regular attendance and active participation are essential. If you have more than three unexcused absences, I will lower your final grade by a full grade. For example, if you have an A but missed four times without explanation, you will receive a B. Please let me know if you will miss class before class.

    Late work and make-up policy:
    Assignments will be accepted for full credit at the beginning of the class period at which they are due. Late work will be penalized 3 points for every two days late. No make-up exams will be given, except in the cases of serious illness, injury, or family emergency.

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